It was the perfect time for seductresses in bikinis and tassels hanging on the backs. He was busy counting the hands, the legs that splashed the water at the beach and ran to the lucky ones who looked lustily at the curves. The background score very well could be “Samundar mein naha ke, aur bhi…..”
I was discounted because I was his sister who sat beside him all at 14 years of age giving him moral support on a family beach holiday. Bro, a young boy in his late teens, wondered why he couldn’t have a girlfriend.
“I just want a normal one. You know decent, a little curvy perhaps and may be who looks like Raveena Tandon ”, he said while looking at the hot bods.
“Yeah, right!” I said with a suppressed smile.
Seeing the pensive look on his face I thought of trying to be on his side, a difficult one but doable, “You will get someone good, Bro”. I said this trying to ignore his shabby locks and a prickly face with the ‘growing and not so growing’ stubble that seemed he hadn’t seen the face of the soap and water together for ages.
Two girls frolicked past the breezy recliners we were sprawled on. “How about a swim, ladies”, he suddenly got up from his chair and asked them.
“Ewww”, I heard one murmur under her breath. “We have got to rush” and off they went back to sun and sand.
“Someday they will understand the gold of my heart. Someday one girl will run to me”. He said while leaning back on the recliner.
I almost doubled up in laughter and then I said something that only a sister can get away with, “Yeah, cursing her fate to meet a stalker like you. Now stop dreaming okay!”
He looked at me with drooping eyes and pressed lips and I sighed. “Alright! When was the last time you looked at yourself in the mirror?”
“Every day lil sis! I look hot, ain’t I!” he grinned.
“Which planet do you live on? In my world it is called SHABBY in capitals”, my eyes and face deeply contorted in disbelief.
“Hey, I look manly in this scruffy look.”
“And then you wonder why no girls look at you. Hah! Go figure out Mr. Man. I mean have you ever touched your face? These whiskers can easily send someone to hospital. You look like a mini porcupine.” Did I tell you I am at my nasty best with my brother?
“What?” He jumped off his seat. “I don’t want to talk to you.” He got up and started moving back to the cottage. While walking back, he put his hand on his face trying to feel his chin and immediately recoiled. I think this time while touching his stubble he decided to be in his future girlfriend’s shoes, oops stilettos. The manhood fizzled out and for the first and probably the last time he agreed to agree with me without admitting of course.
I didn’t see much of him till the evening as I got busy watching the hunks and doing the girly shopping. While visiting the washroom, I saw a macho Gillette shaver lying on the glass shelf and instantly knew this was it(that was the best one even in those days). He emerged out of his self-imposed exile for the dinner with combed locks and scrubbed, smoothened face smelling of a nice after shave.
The strike hit home quite clearly.
No, he didn’t get lucky on the holiday but sure managed to not creep out the girls and got few to look at him like a man too. Now that’s what you call hitting a treasure trove.
This post has been written as a part of the ‘Shave or Crave’ movement in association with BlogAdda.com
It is nicely written apt for the theme.Best wishes,Jas
Thanks Mr. KP
That was nice! All the best for the contest, Jas!
Thanks Scribblehappy
where have you been? long time.
Ha ha. That was good for a morning laugh.Sisters can indeed be nasty, but are also necessary to hold a mirror to their brothers’ scruffy face, right? All the best, Jas.
he he
ya Zephyr I can guarantee that.
Thanks.
Good luck with the contest. I didn’t want to participate because I actually like a bit of stubble…
A two-three day growth looks sexy on some guys. Not a fan of the whole beard and moustache look but stubble is fine…
Thanks PB
it surely didn’t look good on him.
that was a caring sis..best of luck Jas!
Thanks Renu
caring !!!! hmmm irritated.. ya
I couldn’t participate in this contest. Just couldn’t, because I am like the scientists and philosophers, who have more important thoughts than shaving every evening. I think the contest was only for women. The organizers sure know how to get things done.
Destination Infinity
They do and probably every woman has a story related to stubble
Ha ha very nicely written Jas, an innovative angle
All the best!
Thanks PT
I am sure if my brother reads this, he will kill me for his defamation.
Hehehe…..good one,Jas..right before I hit off to bed…good luck for the contest..:-)
Night night.. have sweet dreams of stubble free men
Thanks Latha
perfect post for the contest Jas.. enjoyed reading it.. all the best.. hope u win the trip or I-pad.. nothing lesser than that..
Thanks AM
Aww. a trip would be perfect… but on second thoughts even iPad is not bad
All the best for the contest.
Personally, I am fine with a day or two old stubble but anything beyond that and I am labelled ‘he is not well. Look at his face, Kitna Murjha gaya hai’.
Thanks Amit. My bro looks like that right from day one.
Good! I, hope you win! All the, best.
Thanks Archana
I had a very hearty laugh reading this
Good luck with the contest Jas
Thanks Visha
He will pull my hair just like 3 year olds once he reads this.
Nice post
Ironically I like to rub my hands on my hubbys stubble, he gets irritated and shaves his face clean to keep my hands off his face 
Good luck for the contest Jas…
ha ha
so he has the guru mantra to keep you close as well as far.
Thanks Seena
lol!!! I lvoed your story!!!!
Thanks Smita
LOL, enjoyed reading this…All the best….
Thank you
It’s a very engrossing take on the contest prompt, very different too. We all are stuck with the couple situation here, including me.
All the best.
Thanks Saru. Reading the contest details, I remembered this incident almost instantaneously so stuck to it
When I had first come to know of this contest, I had wondered about what type of entries there might be. But till now all have been very interesting.
Best of luck Jas
He hasn’t till now. He is going to kill me period.
Even I didn’t know what I would write but then the idea just floated itself.
Thanks Bhagyashree
The truth sometimes hurts . . . so does beard stubble.
ha ha
ya.. I saved a lot of women that day.. that’s how I like to see it.
So typically brother and sister
. I also did say the most mean things to my brother. And all the best for the contest too.
The possibility of getting away despite saying all that is the trigger I think
Thanks Rachna.
Nice post! I think only siblings can be so honest with each other. All the best for the contest.
oh yes… no one else can
Thanks Vibha
Well the question is , did he have LUCK after that ..
part 2 to story shud be coming , that will make me decide if I need the shave tooo he he he
ha ha
after a few months he met this girl who is now his wife. So what say?
LOL
Good luck with the contest
Thanks LS
I loved this, Jas! I could just see you there on the beach lending moral support to your brother
The dialogue sparkled and it gave me a lovely chuckle. Thanks!
I am so glad you liked this Kate. Thanks
He needed so much of it at that time.
hahahaha!! Jas …. message recieved well by the bro! All the best!
Ya, He got lucky later so it really worked. Thanks Meena
LOL. Very sweet story!
All the very best for the contest!
Thanks TGND
Bro has already threatened me