Does love come with an expiry date? Is there a label that says, “Best before 3 years from the date of manufacturing”? Even if there is, no one really cares because it is just so mysteriously beautiful. Perhaps it is this mystery that pulls and consumes even the toughest of hearts.
Sheetal, a fiercely independent girl is always focused on what she wants in her life whether it is the Barbie with perfect fashion sense in the toddler years or the MBA degree in the best B school to have a career as an investment banker. It is in this B school she meets Kabir, an easy going lad who takes life as it comes and they discover the love that is passionate and wild. But when love decides to hide behind dirty dishes and soiled laundry after years of marriage, they have only one question to ask each other, “Was it really love?” But the answer is not that simple. That is when starts opening the layers beneath the calm and the complexities of their characters and their fears. And they must now face what is worst nightmare of a relationship, questioning their own intentions.
My inspiration for this story is the world I live in where I see couples whose lives have turned into monotonous gigs despite being passionate individuals. They no longer resemble the fairy tales but get speckled by harsh truths and bludgeoning routines.
Excerpt
There was a miserable sense of submission Sheetal felt every time she saw Kabir walking across the corridors. They had different departments but the corridors ran opposite each other just like the two sides of river- the river she always wanted to cross or get submerged in. Her eyes used to get intertwined in his gaze so tightly that someone else’s words always felt like axe sending her spinning. It was stupid, meaningless yet the heart always pounded hard in the deepest crevices. His ravishing smile, his lively eyes spoke volumes; yet they never said a word to each other.
Was it love?
She didn’t know and just didn’t want to know. Because it was something toxic – something that pulled you so close that you feared losing yourself and melt.
She blinked her eyes and realized that the mirage of those years was nowhere close to the reality of today – the reality where though they slept on the same beds but there was always an invisible glass wall no one dared to break. He put pillows in between saying that it offers comfort to his legs and hands and she worried whether he did not want to touch her even accidentally. What was he afraid of?
This is my entry for the HarperCollins–IndiBlogger Get Published contest, which is run with inputs from Yashodhara Lal and HarperCollins India.
If you Like my entry, please vote at this link . Show me some love.
That looks very nice Jas…Good Luck!
Thank you so much Jaish
What about your entry?
Short and powerful in conveying the message
Best wishes,Jas
Thanks so much Mr. KP
I hope you voted for the idea.
Good luck Jas! Yes, real life is plagued by these real problems… nonetheless, if love is true…. It transcends individual egos, personalities and circumstances
Will have to wait if it really transcends or just fades away
Thanks Midnighthues.
Best of luck! Now that was close. Just 3 days to go.
yeah! I am one of those last minute types
Thanks so much Amit. Did you like the idea well enough to vote for it?
Yes. It was good. I will vote once I reach home. Can’t access the site from here.
Okie… thank you
Loved your excerpt the most…. voted for you!
This story is something I can really connect to as I see such couples all around me. All the best…:)
Thanks a ton PT
voted for u.. love it..waiting to read the full story..
all the best..
Thanks so much AM
for the confidence in the story too
Wow…intriguing..good luck for the contest..you should tell us who the winner is..I read all these posts, but never know who the winner is.
This is just an idea. The bloggers whose ideas will be picked will then have to submit the whole story…. Will let you know. Thank so much Latha.
Reality is always boring, when compared to colourful dreams. No wonder we all hate reality
Destination Infinity
We do but then we have to live with it too
Wow! I know what you mean.
I’ve seen that happening quite a lot, myself.
And, you get my vote right on!
Thank you very much Archana
Ahaa…interesting!! A very ‘today’s’ story. Best of luck, Jas
Thanks Bhagyashree
Are you participating?
Good luck! A friend’s girlfriend left him (a med student) for a “well-settled” man, explaining, “When difficulties come in through the door, love leaves the home through the window”.
oops.. touche… Thanks Nomad
Winning the contest is immaterial, u shud still write this book…because u have a knack of telling stories!
Thanks so much Smita for the encouragement. Someday sure
All the best for the contest.. heading over to read it now
but yes love does come with a expiry date.. because people change we change
The reading is all here only… voting is there…. so please do if your liked my story idea.
May be it is not the love that expires, it is us who fade away.
yeah .. that can be there too .. but people change more
Here comes another story to look forward to… Cheers!!!
I wrote a story too…
Thanks M
I am now hopping over to read yours
Voted, Jas. I can see where the inspiration for your story comes from – I wish things were different – but people do tend to tire easily of their relationships these days.
Thanks so much Corinne. I agree. Life is so fast paced and sometimes they find that it more important to be in the race than hold the hands of the partner lagging behind.
Well Jas, would love to find out if they manage to break through the glass wall. A red heart from me.
Thanks a ton Kay Em
Your vote means a lot.
I love reading your blog and I’m sure you’ll do a great job with this story as well. Voter# 16!
Thankoooooo Nisha
I hope we get the chance to present the whole story.
Wow. That’s really nice. I really want to read the rest of the story. Good Luck. This is what is happening normally these days.
Thanks a lot Ashwini. I will be able to tell the whole story only if I get enough votes for the idea so please vote
A story that speaks about so many of today’s couples. Nice take!
All the very best for the contest!
Thanks so much TGND. If you really like the idea, do vote for it at the mentioned link in the post…
Good luck dear
. The idea seems nice.
Thanks so much Rachna. I hope you have voted for the idea
Good Luck Jas, glad you made it on time
Ya it was right in the nick of time
Thanks Era.
Good luck Jas!
Thanks Renu
Interesting…All the best…
Thanks
You write really well and hope to see your story published. Well I am hoping it for every friend of mine so that I don’t need to buy it. You guys can gift it to me as a token of my sincere wishes
All the best Jas
Thank you so much Saru
Okay, let me promise you one thing here – if my story gets published, I will definitely send you the book wherever you are.
Since you have promised, I will doubly pray for you
And bring you few more votes.
yipeee
Jas. Happy New Year! You have a wonderful imagination and a great way with words! All the best for the contest!
Thanks LLT
Wish you a rocking New Year.
Thanks a million.
Like your story idea. Voting done. Hope it is not too late. Good luck!
No It is not
Thanks so much. Hope you had a wonderful new year’s eve
Really gud one Jaspreet!Waiting eagrly 4 d complete story…!
Thanks so much Pratibha
Hope I get enough votes to tell the story. Good to have you here.
Nice! And very true in today’s world! Voted.
Thanks Deepa for the confidence and for the vote
Very powerful it sounds Jas
wish you loads of luck. Sorry I am late. am I too late to vote?
No you are not late to vote so go right away and do that
Thanks Toffee
I think falling in love is different and keeping up a constant healthy relationship is a totally different things.
May be that’s why all the best love stories are incomplete
yes it a different ball game. But it on to the partners whether they want to complete it or not.
I’m yet to put up my post
no time at all !!! Though the timeline has been extended so I guess I still have a chance, let’s see!
Loved your storyline Jas..as always brilliantly built write-up! Of course I’m going to show you some love
ya it has and you should give it a try.
Thankooooo
When Chemistry gets dissolved in the mundane – haven’t we faced it all!
Oh yes we all have at one point or the other.
Voted and really Liked, hehe. Goodluck, Jas!
Thanks Tita
a lot
Nice, Jas! I’m sure a lot of couples will relate to this story. All the best!
Thanks Divs… hope you have voted too..
When one dawn someone comes like a sudden wind, pulls evey rose in your garden from its roots… When one dawn someone comes like a tidal wave, washes ashore every oyster from the deep — and leaves as suddenly — leaving only the fragrant of roses in your hair, and tiny pearls at your feet — that split second of confusion behind the lashes of your tightly shut eyes is what “Love” is.
In your story the thoughts are manifested wonderfully and written as beautifully.
Thanks silentfingers
Voted for you…all the best…
Thanks
Realisitic…
Liked yours…
Please read and vote for mine…
http://www.indiblogger.in/getpublished/idea/461/
Sure Mimasa. Thanks for voting.
Hi Jas,
Coming from a Business school, I can realize the type of relationships which exist on the campus. Rarely do people objectively view their relations, wants and desires under the microscope to see whether both are able to sustain each other for a life long voyage.
The idea looks compelling. waiting for the complete story
My vote goes to you, wish you luck
:):)
P.S. Do check out & vote for my entry for Get Published.
Regards
Jay
My Blog | My Entry to Indiblogger Get Published
Thanks a lot Jay
I am hopping on to read yours
hey this is wonderful! I loved it and would love to see this published.
My best wishes, Jas!
Thanks so much Uma… Need your like. Please please go on the link and click on the red heart.